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Revision diff viewer

Two columns — old on the red side, new on the green side. Added lines glow green, removed lines glow red, and editor notes hang off the right margin. Three states — intro rewrite, single-line tweak, no-op revision.

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Revision diff viewer is a reusable Oak Flats Muffler Men UI primitive with documented states, accessibility expectations, theme behavior, and implementation evidence.

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Revision diff viewer: Two columns — old on the red side, new on the green side. Added lines glow green, removed lines glow red, and editor notes hang off the right margin. Three states — intro rewrite, single-line tweak, no-op revision.

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Revision 3 · Mia's first passMia Pellegrino · Mon 25 May · 14:08
Old

Tightened intro, swapped "loud" for "growling", added Wollongong reference.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 2that the owner said had been there a while.
  3. 4 
  4. 5A healthy twin system runs quiet. When a baffle fails, the noise gets ragged.
  5. 9 
  6. 10We start with a cold-engine listen-down, then probe each weld with a stethoscope.
Revision 4 · Daniel's bay-floor passDaniel Fleuren · Tue 26 May · 09:32
New

Replaced generic Falcon intro with the actual Bay 3 job, added stethoscope detail.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 3that the owner reckoned had crept in over a fortnight.Aussie cadence — closer to how Daniel actually talks to customers.
  3. 4 
  4. 6A healthy twin system sings through the tail pipes. Once a baffle perforates,
  5. 7exhaust pulses start fighting each other and you get that wet, ragged growlAdds the sensory detail Mia kept asking for.
  6. 8most Wollongong drivers describe as a chesty cough.
  7. 9 
  8. 10We start with a cold-engine listen-down, then probe each weld with a stethoscope.
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Revision 3 · Mia's first passMia Pellegrino · Mon 25 May · 14:08
Old

Tightened intro, swapped "loud" for "growling", added Wollongong reference.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 2that the owner said had been there a while.
  3. 4 
Revision 4 · Daniel's bay-floor passDaniel Fleuren · Tue 26 May · 09:32
New

Single sentence rewrite — cadence pass on the lead paragraph.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 3that the owner reckoned had crept in over a fortnight.Aussie cadence — closer to how Daniel actually talks to customers.
  3. 4 
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Revision 4 · Daniel's bay-floor passDaniel Fleuren · Tue 26 May · 09:32
Old

Replaced generic Falcon intro with the actual Bay 3 job, added stethoscope detail.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 2 
  3. 3 
  4. 4We start with a cold-engine listen-down, then probe each weld with a stethoscope.
Revision 5 · Mia format passMia Pellegrino · Wed 27 May · 10:08
New

Adjusted micro-typography only — no copy changes.

  1. 1Last Tuesday a 2008 BF Falcon rolled into Bay 3 with a deep, gargling note
  2. 2 
  3. 3 
  4. 4We start with a cold-engine listen-down, then probe each weld with a stethoscope.